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Then again, I'm a nut-job
Epic work; really expressive and cool ID
One thing I'd like to point out (not to dampen your spirits) is the believability of the pose? I would have had the other hand be drawing the graffiti, because the way you drew this, the neck is twisting painfully... and the line of sight is too dead-on towards us the audience... I just tried the pose myself, and I couldn't achieve the same pose and line of sight.
I would try the pose out yourself to see if it makes sense. I'm not saying its not well drawn; it is very well drawn. But the posing could use a tad more work... imo
Hope this helps for future work!!
Thanks. Your critique is dead on. I should've angled the body more that way the head could turn that way more relaxed. Something to be learned and practiced. I appreciate it.
Like I said, compared to the other works I saw in your gallery, this is a great improvement, and I like how this turned out a LOT!
I struggle with the same thing... I'm too stubborn to pose first before I draw xD I want to test my imagination and knowledge. But I'm trying to break that habit, because it really helps. So I know I'm being a hypocrite, but if you can improve from it, then I will say it!! xD as they say, "haste makes waste" xD... especially when roughing out sketches (speaking from personal experience
Keep on drawing awesomely!!
Its Awesome