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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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p.s.- I'm not a master of dynamism either, but I can see lack of dynamism 9 times out of 10... I'm not claiming to be better or anything, just wanted to let you know!
the way her neck is drawn suggests a head looking more down. But her hair feels like it was drawn with the mindset of a woman looking straight ahead in profile. Maybe you've intended for a more elongated head, though? I'm not quite sure.
Another thing that my mentor always points out is lack of dynamism. You've clearly indicated the curves of the body, but the drawing still looks stiff because the body still looks straight... exaggerating the curvature of the body so the chest and behind stick out more will enhance the dynamism and feminine traits of the character more.
Overall good job here!! Just be careful with the anatomical and dynamic aspects of your work... generally, exaggeration that is believable is best.
You would benefit greatly from a mentor who can guide these studies... I really think that's the best way to go.